忘不了(想叫英文好的帮我翻译一下，谁叫我是中国人，而且是理科生，这是我自己写的）

Beelzebub · 发表于 25-1-2005 23:24:46|来自：新加坡

曾试图把你忘记
可是，似乎每次总是忘了对自己说要忘记
每天晚上，总是伴着你的回忆入睡
每天清晨，总是伴着你的笑脸起床
刷牙时总是情不自禁地望着你用过的牙刷
吃饭时总是情不自禁德想起你为我亲自下厨
想着我们的回忆
也想着我们的痛
一湾浅浅的海水将你我相隔
太平洋的海浪将你我的爱磨灭
太多的甜蜜，也太多的痛苦
想忘了你，却忘不了你
Baby 此刻的你是否此时与我一样感同身受
此刻的你是否为我而发呆
曾试图把你忘记
可是越是想忘记就越难忘记
当工作累了的时候感受不到你温暖的肩膀
当生病的时候看不见你心疼的眼光
想忘了我们的甜蜜，忘了我们的痛苦
却无法做到
我们的爱早已把甜蜜与痛苦织成一张牢牢的网
将你我的心紧紧地缠绕在一起
Baby 此刻的你是否已感受到我对你的恋恋不舍
此刻的你是否已感受到我已为你魂不守舍
也许 这是上天在故意戏弄我们
让我们彼此之间受尽的煎熬
请告诉我该怎么样忘记你
我的最爱

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小除 · 发表于 26-1-2005 02:31:06|来自：新加坡

i was trying to froget youbut, i always forget to remind myself to forget youeverynight, i am going to sleep with our' s memoryevery morning, i am get up with ur shinning smilewhen i am brushing my teeth, my eyes always stare at ur toothbrushwhen i am having lunch, i always remember that u have cooked the food for me beforethinking of ours own memoryand thinking of the distress from it also.......a sea with its full water separet us into two different placesurf of the Pacific Ocean put ours love downtoo many sweet things and company with too many distree....i wanna forget you, but i cantbaby...are you the same feeling with me at this moment?wil you trance because of mei was trying to forget youbut the harder i have tried...the deeper that i remember youwhen i was tired in working, i cant feel your warm aroundwhen i was ill, i cant see ur care for eyesi want to forget our's happiness and the distree in ours lifebut i really cantours love already became a firm net which is make by ours happiness and the painlet ours heart can not sepratebaby..do u know that i am still loving u do you noties that my heart has gone with youmaybe ,it s just a joke by the Godhe make the love between us agonizetell me how can i forget you my lover ,plz........(大概大概吧。。。可能有些错误的地方。。。谁来纠正一下吧。。。偶也就翻着看看的。。。不过还是不知道这写的到底是怎么回事情。。。到底他爱你不爱了阿？怎么一会儿心连心一会儿就。。。[em06]

wert45 · 发表于 26-1-2005 02:07:17|来自：新加坡

舍不得结束就别开始一段感情，想忘记就要一切归零。忘记爱情，忘记伴侣，忘了孤寂，也至少忘记当初为何在一起，忘记什麽叫做回忆到最后，忘记呼吸，忘记心跳。

花心石 · 发表于 26-1-2005 10:13:00|来自：新加坡

诗不好翻译，重在意而不在形，还要念起来顺口，要考虑中西文化的差异。原诗也太理科味了。
我也是理科生，来试翻着玩玩：

曾试图把你忘记 I've ever try to forget you
可是，似乎每次总是忘了对自己说要忘记 but always forget to remind myself
每天晚上，总是伴着你的回忆入睡 your memory are filling my dreams
每天清晨，总是伴着你的笑脸起床 and your smile shining my wake
刷牙时总是情不自禁地望着你用过的牙刷 your toothbrush remind me on the morning
吃饭时总是情不自禁德想起你为我亲自下厨 and the lunch time bring me the memory of your cooking
想着我们的回忆 I recalls every lovely minute with you
也想着我们的痛 and the painful memory as well
一湾浅浅的海水将你我相隔 the shallow strait set us apart
太平洋的海浪将你我的爱磨灭 and the Pacific wave worn our loves away
太多的甜蜜，也太多的痛苦 so sweet, and so painful
想忘了你，却忘不了你 I means to forget you, while engrave your name deeper on my mind
Baby 此刻的你是否此时与我一样感同身受 Baby, are you sharing my feeling?
此刻的你是否为我而发呆 are you also thinking about me
曾试图把你忘记 I've ever try to forget you可是越是想忘记就越难忘记 but the harder i tried, the deeper I fallen in love
当工作累了的时候感受不到你温暖的肩膀 I'd never feel your warmly support when I was tired
当生病的时候看不见你心疼的眼光 and no your spoiling care when I was ill
想忘了我们的甜蜜，忘了我们的痛苦 I tried to forget all the past happiness and suffering却无法做到 but always in vain
我们的爱早已把甜蜜与痛苦织成一张牢牢的网 my love weaves all the sweet and the pain a net
将你我的心紧紧地缠绕在一起 wraps our hearts
Baby 此刻的你是否已感受到我对你的恋恋不舍 Baby, do you know I'm mad for you
此刻的你是否已感受到我已为你魂不守舍 I'm dying for you
也许 这是上天在故意戏弄我们 Maybe it's the fate
让我们彼此之间受尽的煎熬 which makes us torment each other
请告诉我该怎么样忘记你 Just tell me how can I forget you, my love 我的最爱

小除 · 发表于 26-1-2005 03:32:46|来自：新加坡

谢拉~

zqalj86 · 发表于 26-1-2005 03:29:15|来自：新加坡

一点语法错误。。可以纠正。。

x-man · 发表于 26-1-2005 23:33:26|来自：新加坡

it is impressive ,翻译的不赖阿，很有洋味..........

花心石 · 发表于 27-1-2005 11:02:09|来自：新加坡

〉〉Baby, do you know I'm mad for you
这句好像有点不对，是不是应该是用crazy about？
mad with ab. 是对某人生气的意思

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