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发表于 11-2-2012 09:36:34|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 KQKD 于 11-2-2012 10:04 编辑

麻烦大家帮我看下这段英文有需要修改的地方吗?
He had been driving with a painted Monarch butterflies look like miniature aircaft follow Monarch butterfly to Mexico.
Mexican children wearing clothing with butterfly wings to meet him.



华文要的大概意思是:他曾经驾驶一架被涂成MONARCH BUTTERFLY 样子的微型飞机跟随MONARCH BUTTERFLY 到达墨西哥.
                                墨西哥儿童身穿带有蝴蝶翅膀的服装迎接他..

发表于 11-2-2012 16:45:43|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
小狮租房
没有人发言是因为不需要修改吗?

求教J版!!

呼唤J版!


J版请赐教!
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发表于 11-2-2012 21:33:30|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
He had been driving with a painted Monarch butterflies look like miniature aircaft follow Monarch butterfly to Mexico.
Mexican children wearing clothing with butterfly wings to meet him.

He had been following a Monarch butterfly on a small aircraft with Monarch butterflies paintings to Mexico. The mexican children he met there were also wearing cloths with butterfly wings.
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发表于 11-2-2012 22:40:42|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
陪读娘娘 发表于 11-2-2012 21:33
He had been driving with a painted Monarch butterflies look like miniature aircaft follow Monarch bu ...

多谢娘娘指教! 更正中.........
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发表于 12-2-2012 23:56:01|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
There was a time he flew to Mexico while following the Monarch butterfly on a small aircraft. The aircraft was painted with designs that made it looked like a Monarch butterfly itself.  As he arrived, he was warmly welcomed by Mexican children wearing clothing with butterfly wings.
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发表于 13-2-2012 08:54:50|来自:新加坡 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
英学薘人 发表于 12-2-2012 23:56
There was a time he flew to Mexico while following the Monarch butterfly on a small aircraft. The ai ...

学习了!非常感谢'!
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发表于 13-2-2012 11:17:33|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 半九 于 13-2-2012 11:23 编辑

试试这个,如果你是要强调"同样一种蝴蝶"的话..

It was monarch butterflies that he tattooed on his miniplane once he piloted to pursue their enormous migration up to Mexico. Likewise, he was greeted by Mexican children whose dresses featured the very same butterfly too.
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发表于 13-2-2012 17:50:38|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 jjrchome 于 13-2-2012 18:22 编辑

He once flew with the Monarch Butterflies in a light aircraft which was painted to resemble the "Monarch" and, he was warmly greeted by the children wearing butterfly wings when his plane touched down in Mexico.

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发表于 13-2-2012 20:48:51|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
半九 发表于 13-2-2012 11:17
试试这个,如果你是要强调"同样一种蝴蝶"的话..

It was monarch butterflies that he tattooed on his ...

看了你们写的觉得自己比小豆豆班的水平都差太远了......感谢!
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发表于 13-2-2012 20:55:46|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
jjrchome 发表于 13-2-2012 17:50
He once flew with the Monarch Butterflies in a light aircraft which was painted to resemble the "Mon ...

现在觉得想要学好英文还真不是容易的事!学无止境....向偶像敬礼
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