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发表于 25-8-2004 22:40:37|来自:新加坡
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<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>hello_babe</I>在2004-8-25 22:14:01的发言:</B>
<P>the translation is below. not very good. I altered it a lot...</P>
<P>The beauty of success lies with grooming, it is the splendidness from tough work, it is the rainbow after the rain; but, don't forget, the days with tears and blood, the evidence of our unpredictable potential, our invinsible stamina and our promising future...</P>[em07]</DIV>
<P>excellent,translated passage did not have to follow the meaning of origenal sentences word by word,as long as the meanings of each translated sentence are close to the origenal one,hence readers could have a clear understanding on the initial article after ur translation,ur skill can be deemed as satisfactory..........
<P>really a good job...!!!</P> |
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