[求助]拜托，谁能帮帮我翻译一下英文啊~

danhe · 发表于 4-8-2004 15:21:30|来自：上海嘉定区

STUDY PLAN

Dear Sir/ Mdm:
First of all, I would like to express my deepest appreciation to you for spending time on reading my plan.
My name is xxx, a citizen of People Republic of China, I am 19 years old this year, I was born in 15th June, 1985. And I am currently taking diploma course at Shanghai Jianqiao colleauge.
Ever since the reformation of new economic system has been started few decades ago, china has been developing in a rapid pace, and the speed of this process will eventually even faster then before after China joined the WTO. Therefore, more contemporary skills and knowledge are required for the new generation in China. In order to catch up the fast pace of economic development, today, many parents from China have choose to send their children to study overseas. By doing this, new generation in China will not only able to find out more opportunities that available to them, but also will have better understanding of other counties’ culture.
After several discussion with my parents, I have made the decision that to pursue my further study in Singapore, as far as we concern, Singapore is not only a multi-nation and multi-culture country, but it has also a wonderful study environment. And if I am able to study under such great circumstance, my parents will eventually feel at ease and will not have to worry about me, especially to a girl. 
I have submitted my application to study Hotel management course at AIT Academic. After certain research that I have done, I found out that this school has a experienced lecturers team, and contemporary teaching facilities. In the meanwhile, they are prestigious in Singapore as well, and I believe it is a great place for me to study. In order to complete my course, I will have to study the fundamental knowledge in campus for 8 months, and subsequently, I have to undergo 6 months’ attachment, and only then, I will be considered as complete my whole course and graduate from AIT Academic.
During my 14 months studies, I will try my very best to explore my potential capability, broaden my view and enrich my overall professional knowledge to confront the future challenges.
Both my parents have a stable income and we also have enough saving to sustain my study in Singapore. And I believe this stable financial situation will help me to concentrate on my study.
I hereby truly seek for your approval on my study application, and I am sincerely looking forward to treasure this overseas’ study opportunities, I will strictly follow the rules and regulation in Singapore and dedicate to my study. Upon finishing my study, I will apply all my professional knowledge to my career and devote myself to my hometown and my dearest country.
Best Regards
xxxxx

danhe · 发表于 4-8-2004 15:25:31|来自：上海嘉定区

its better for you to give me another email account, so i can send to you with the perfect format.... please send a email to <a href="[email protected]" target="_blank" >[email protected]</A>, so that i can send it over to ya... and you contact me with this email account anytime.

danhe · 发表于 4-8-2004 13:30:38|来自：上海嘉定区

你的邮箱不对，发不过去，有没有MSN? 我的MSN 是<a href="[email protected]" target="_blank" >[email protected]</A>. 我可以在网上传给你

hotrex · 发表于 5-8-2004 01:10:59|来自：上海嘉定区

<DIV class=quote>以下是引用mjflchiah在2004-8-4 21:19:27的发言：

1）租用一件房间，摆几张桌子，买几台电脑，聘请本地的作part time教师，就是一所大学。

2）同洋人校长，留个影，再交S$500，就可以拿个master,

3）这样的大学培养出来的人才，也可以说是为了上海、祖国的明天？？？？？？？？？，留学目的让人怀疑？？？？

4）很多中国人借留学、配读的名义，到新加坡后去做另外“说不出口”的事。前几日，就有一上海年轻女子，在芽笼（红灯区），同一50多岁的老男人在一起，被一轿车不幸撞死，让人感到有可怜、又可叹。

5）中国人在新加坡不好的形象，几乎每3-5天就会发生一起，上海现在不是很富裕了吗，为什么还有人往外跑？而且还做那种事？？？？？


</DIV>

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GriGri · 发表于 5-8-2004 02:22:29|来自：上海嘉定区

<DIV class=quote>以下是引用danhe在2004-8-4 15:21:30的发言：
STUDY PLAN

Dear Sir/ Mdm:
First of all, I would like to express my deepest appreciation to you for spending time on reading my plan.
My name is xxx, a citizen of People (People's) Republic of China, I am 19 years old this year, I was born in 15th June, 1985. And I am currently taking diploma course at Shanghai Jianqiao Colleauge.
Ever since the reformation of the new economic system has been (which) started few decades ago, china has been developing in a rapid pace, and the speed of this process will eventually be even faster then (than) before after China joined the WTO. <- 中国已经加入WTO，这句话应该用"and this process is even faster after China joined the WTO.Therefore, more contemporary skills and knowledge are required for the new generation in China. In order to catch up with the fast pace of economic development, today, many parents from (in) China have choose to send their children to study overseas. (send their children to study overseas.) By doing this, the new generation in China will not only (be) able to find out more opportunities that available to them, but also will (at the same time) have better understanding of (on) other counties’(countries') culture.
After several discussions with my parents, I have made the decision that (decided) to pursue my further study in Singapore, as far as we concern, Singapore is not only a multi-nation (multi-religion) and multi-culture country, but it has also a wonderful study environment. And if I am able to study under such great circumstance, my parents will eventually feel at ease and will not have to worry about me, especially to a girl. (建议加一个句子，没想好怎么改) 
I have submitted my application to study Hotel management course at AIT Academic. After certain research that I have done, I found out that this school has a experienced lecturers (teaching) team, and contemporary teaching facilities. In the meanwhile, they are prestigious in Singapore as well, and I believe it is a great place for me to study. In order to complete my course, I will have to study the fundamental knowledge in campus for 8 months, and subsequently, I will have to undergo 6 months’ attachment, and only then (after that), I will be considered as completed my whole course and graduated from AIT Academic.
During my 14 months (of study) studies, I will try my very best to explore my potential capability, broaden my view and enrich my overall professional knowledge to confront the future challenges.
Both my parents have a stable income and we also have enough saving to sustain my study in Singapore. And I believe this stable financial situation will help (allow) me to concentrate on my study.
I hereby truly seek for your approval on my study application, and I am (will) sincerely looking forward to treasure this overseas’ study opportunities (opportunity), I will strictly follow the rules and regulations in Singapore and dedicate to my study. Upon finishing my study, I will apply all my professional knowledge to my career and devote myself to my hometown and my dearest country.
Best Regards
xxxxx </DIV>
红色 －我认为不恰当或者有错误，应该删除
蓝色 －我的意见

改到我快疯了。。。

感谢这位同学的乐于助人，同时希望你检查过后再发上来。而且，有时候不要原文照翻，会变得很罗嗦。如果对语法不太肯定，少用长句子！读的人都会犯迷糊。

我的英文也不是很好，只是发现一些错误。有些则是觉得语句蹩脚，稍作改动。如有冒犯，请原谅。[em07]

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-8-5 2:28:53编辑过]

太伊 · 发表于 5-8-2004 03:17:08|来自：上海嘉定区

楼上的哥们厉害了，有耐心有些话确实要删，因为压根就没有真正的中文能准确无误地翻译出来，所以你的原文要尽可能写的“西方化”

摘星1215 · 发表于 5-8-2004 10:20:16|来自：上海嘉定区

<DIV class=quote>以下是引用GriGri在2004-8-5 2:22:29的发言：

红色 －我认为不恰当或者有错误，应该删除
蓝色 －我的意见

改到我快疯了。。。

感谢这位同学的乐于助人，同时希望你检查过后再发上来。而且，有时候不要原文照翻，会变得很罗嗦。如果对语法不太肯定，少用长句子！读的人都会犯迷糊。

我的英文也不是很好，只是发现一些错误。有些则是觉得语句蹩脚，稍作改动。如有冒犯，请原谅。[em07]
</DIV>

十分感谢您的帮助，我太感动了，麻烦您帮我改了~

摘星1215 · 发表于 5-8-2004 10:18:19|来自：上海嘉定区

<DIV class=quote>以下是引用danhe在2004-8-4 15:21:30的发言：

STUDY PLAN

Dear Sir/ Mdm:
First of all, I would like to express my deepest appreciation to you for spending time on reading my plan.
My name is xxx, a citizen of People Republic of China, I am 19 years old this year, I was born in 15th June, 1985. And I am currently taking diploma course at Shanghai Jianqiao colleauge.
Ever since the reformation of new economic system has been started few decades ago, china has been developing in a rapid pace, and the speed of this process will eventually even faster then before after China joined the WTO. Therefore, more contemporary skills and knowledge are required for the new generation in China. In order to catch up the fast pace of economic development, today, many parents from China have choose to send their children to study overseas. By doing this, new generation in China will not only able to find out more opportunities that available to them, but also will have better understanding of other counties’ culture.
After several discussion with my parents, I have made the decision that to pursue my further study in Singapore, as far as we concern, Singapore is not only a multi-nation and multi-culture country, but it has also a wonderful study environment. And if I am able to study under such great circumstance, my parents will eventually feel at ease and will not have to worry about me, especially to a girl. 
I have submitted my application to study Hotel management course at AIT Academic. After certain research that I have done, I found out that this school has a experienced lecturers team, and contemporary teaching facilities. In the meanwhile, they are prestigious in Singapore as well, and I believe it is a great place for me to study. In order to complete my course, I will have to study the fundamental knowledge in campus for 8 months, and subsequently, I have to undergo 6 months’ attachment, and only then, I will be considered as complete my whole course and graduate from AIT Academic.
During my 14 months studies, I will try my very best to explore my potential capability, broaden my view and enrich my overall professional knowledge to confront the future challenges.
Both my parents have a stable income and we also have enough saving to sustain my study in Singapore. And I believe this stable financial situation will help me to concentrate on my study.
I hereby truly seek for your approval on my study application, and I am sincerely looking forward to treasure this overseas’ study opportunities, I will strictly follow the rules and regulation in Singapore and dedicate to my study. Upon finishing my study, I will apply all my professional knowledge to my career and devote myself to my hometown and my dearest country.
Best Regards
xxxxx </DIV>

十分感谢你的帮助，但我MSN，如果可以的话你可以加我QQ通过QQ传，可以吗？

摘星1215 · 发表于 5-8-2004 10:03:12|来自：上海嘉定区

<DIV class=quote>以下是引用mjflchiah在2004-8-4 21:19:27的发言：

1）租用一件房间，摆几张桌子，买几台电脑，聘请本地的作part time教师，就是一所大学。

2）同洋人校长，留个影，再交S$500，就可以拿个master,

3）这样的大学培养出来的人才，也可以说是为了上海、祖国的明天？？？？？？？？？，留学目的让人怀疑？？？？

4）很多中国人借留学、配读的名义，到新加坡后去做另外“说不出口”的事。前几日，就有一上海年轻女子，在芽笼（红灯区），同一50多岁的老男人在一起，被一轿车不幸撞死，让人感到有可怜、又可叹。

5）中国人在新加坡不好的形象，几乎每3-5天就会发生一起，上海现在不是很富裕了吗，为什么还有人往外跑？而且还做那种事？？？？？


</DIV>
我去这个学校是因为我们大学和那里有联合办学才去的，况且我们已有回来的同学了，没有阁下说的那么差劲啊，我知道AIT的却不是好的学校，但我到新加坡留学，目的就是学习，何况AIT的酒店专业还是不错的。还有增强自我独立能力，难道每个女生都象阁下说的那样吗？那阁下未免也对中国女留学生太有偏见了吧，个人情况不同，不能统一而论。我的目的很单纯，请不要因为一些人而贬低所有人。

[求助]拜托，谁能帮帮我翻译一下英文啊~

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