请教一个语法问题

小鱼王子

<b><FONT face=Verdana>kill....</FONT></b>

okaylah

<P><a href="https://www.sgchinese.com/bbs" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>www.sgchinese.com/bbs</FONT></A>, a website for the Chinese in Singapore, which is built on ASP technology attracts visitors mainly from Singapore.</P><P>'a website for the Chinese in Singapore' - this construction is known as appositive/apposition (同位语).</P>

greentea1

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>okaylah</I>在2005-10-27 19:06:00的发言：</B>

<P><a href="https://www.sgchinese.com/bbs" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>www.sgchinese.com/bbs</FONT></A>, a website for the Chinese in Singapore, which is built on ASP technology attracts visitors mainly from Singapore.</P>
<P>'a website for the Chinese in Singapore' - this construction is known as appositive/apposition (同位语).</P></DIV>
<P>谢谢这位朋友的回答
<P>能否再看一下主贴中的问题，并针对问题进行回答一下呢？在不修改其它部分的情况下，谢谢</P>

红月亮

<P>i think can change<b> is</b> to <b>was.</b></P><P>if you want to keep it as one sentence should not  delete<b> with</b></P><P>acturally, i don't think this sentence is well organised,feel confused read one more time:""""<a href="https://www.sgchinese.com/bbs" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>www.sgchinese.com/bbs</FONT></A> is a website for Chinese people in Singapore, which is built based on ASP technology, with users mainly from Singapore."""</P><P> the first half,it aid that it  is for chinese people in singapore,then the last part say again users are mailly from singapore,it is repeated....</P><P>so i think take it can be<b>:www.sgchinese.com/bbs is a wbsite for chinese  speaking peaple,which was built based on ASP technology.Its users are mailly from singapore</b>.</P><P>so how do you think about that?</P><P>hehe i even more confused....</P>

okaylah

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>红月亮</I>在2005-10-28 15:38:00的发言：</B>

<P>i think can change<B> is</B> to <B>was.</B></P>
<P>if you want to keep it as one sentence should not  delete<B> with</B></P>
<P>acturally, i don't think this sentence is well organised,feel confused read one more time:""""<a href="https://www.sgchinese.com/bbs" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>www.sgchinese.com/bbs</FONT></A> is a website for Chinese people in Singapore, which is built based on ASP technology, with users mainly from Singapore."""</P>
<P>the first half,it aid that it  is for chinese people in singapore,then the last part say again users are mailly from singapore,it is repeated....</P>
<P>so i think take it can be<B>:www.sgchinese.com/bbs is a wbsite for chinese  speaking peaple,which was built based on ASP technology.Its users are mailly from singapore</B>.</P>
<P>so how do you think about that?</P>
<P>hehe i even more confused....</P></DIV>
<P><a href="https://www.sgchinese.com/bbs" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>www.sgchinese.com/bbs</FONT></A>, built on ASP technology, is a Singapore website meant for Chinese- speakng people and visited mainly by the local Chinese community.
<P>'...which was <U>built based on</U> ASP technology' - 'build on' = use as a basis = based on, you either say something is 'built on' or 'based on' not both.

小鱼王子

<b><FONT face=Verdana>keep it up</FONT></b>

泡泡er

i don't think that two words can be omitted.