my homework

玉兰 · 发表于 19-11-2006 10:41:00|来自：

19 Nov  2006   Today  is  Sunday  ,usually I play badminton in the afternoon ! so ,I clean and tidy house in the morning ,I have finished housework now and still have some free time for doing something if I want ,at this moment, I want to finish my diary , I know that I have to do it ,practically ,nothing could be wrote ,,,,  I have in remembrance about that I played badminton on last Sunday ,,,,I have been affiliated  a team  a half year ,the team consist of about ten team member. They are all younger than me  and  they are all working in a same company which is a famous IT company in the world !Our team lead is a nice guy who is from china ,28 yeas old ,he and his wife are all working this IT company. His wife is a beautiful girl ,she is looked younger than her husband ,,,from Shanxi of China ,,,,  Last Sunday , I had finished warm-up before they arrived ,about 3pm, I saw our team lead arrived alone ,so I asked  him why his wife did not come here , he told me that his wife was making 馒头 in home ,she would be later!  I were so surprise ,,his wife is looked so refinement\ gentle and weak,, I can’t  imagine that she did some homemade in kitchen .later when I saw her ,I ask her why did she make 馒头by herself ,how did she learn making it ,she told me ,she and her husband are from west-north  of china ,they like Chinese flour food very much ,but they could buy it in Singapore , so  she tried  to make it ,after a few times lost ,now she could make it well ,she also told me ,she is a wife ,she has to do it ,no choice ! I think ,she is a good  wife![em05][em05][em05][em05][em05]

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yelunp · 发表于 19-11-2006 14:48:00|来自：

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder">以下是引用玉兰在2006-11-19 13:57:00的发言： hehe,i have to go to club for playing badminton, usually when I was after playing badminton ,I would feel hungry,,,so ,dear yulunp,,,,if you haven't 包子,,can you send some bread to me ? i am never captious,,,[em05][em05][em05][em05][em05][em05]</div>哦，原来玉兰还是一个吃小亏赚大便宜的人。一定是认真读过刘少奇那本<论共产党员的修养>。现在不行了，自从前两个小时读了你的帖子之后，肚子饿的现在还站不起来。今天没做工，没有钱，泪汪汪，撕块破布做衣裳。窗外北风呼呼地响，我的娘，紧紧将儿抱在胸膛。咦，我说到哪儿了，饿昏头了。哈哈！

天使900323 · 发表于 19-11-2006 14:03:00|来自：

玉兰不是很会包包子吗  [em01][em01]  等着品尝她的厨艺呢  怎么都没有动静了呀[em07][em07][em07]

玉兰 · 发表于 19-11-2006 20:42:00|来自：

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder">以下是引用天使900323在2006-11-19 14:03:00的发言： 玉兰不是很会包包子吗  [em01][em01]  等着品尝她的厨艺呢  怎么都没有动静了呀[em07][em07][em07]</div>dear  Angell(天使):  If you have enough patient, I'm sure ,I will make 包子 for you at sometime,,,,,,

玉兰 · 发表于 19-11-2006 20:37:00|来自：

Poor yelunp,,,,Don't worry ,Yulan always consort with you,,,,If I have two 包子,I will halve with you,,if I have one  包子 only ,we still share in it,,,[em05][em05][em05][em05][em05][em05]

天使900323 · 发表于 20-11-2006 00:16:00|来自：

我就等着你的包子了   不过要提前三天告诉我（我就不吃饭了，空着肚子，等吃包子） [em07][em07][em07]

玉兰 · 发表于 21-11-2006 23:05:00|来自：

21  Nov.  2006    Today we have a exam about reading and speaking , teacher gave us a story which name is < AN OCCURRENCE AT OWL CREEK BRIGE> ,by Ambrose Bierce,  The story is not very long ,but it is so difficult to understand ,because most part of story describe the mental activity of dramatis personae who was a planter in <country-region wst="on"><place wst="on">America</place></country-region> southern, it start from  he would be killed ,until he died ,,, We got this story at yesterday ,after school ,when I were in home ,I spend  four hours for reading it . Reading mental novel is hardworking for me , especially there are so many new words,,, such as :  Sergeant , executioner, dewdrop, lieutenant, ,,,,,,,,,,so hard,,,,  But finally , I can understand what the story is about,,,,[em06][em06][em06][em06][em06]

玉兰 · 发表于 21-11-2006 23:05:00|来自：

21  Nov.  2006    Today we have a exam about reading and speaking , teacher gave us a story which name is < AN OCCURRENCE AT OWL CREEK BRIGE> ,by Ambrose Bierce,  The story is not very long ,but it is so difficult to understand ,because most part of story describe the mental activity of dramatis personae who was a planter in <country-region wst="on"><place wst="on">America</place></country-region> southern, it start from  he would be killed ,until he died ,,, We got this story at yesterday ,after school ,when I were in home ,I spend  four hours for reading it . Reading mental novel is hardworking for me , especially there are so many new words,,, such as :  Sergeant , executioner, dewdrop, lieutenant, ,,,,,,,,,,so hard,,,,  But finally , I can understand what the story is about,,,,[em06][em06][em06][em06][em06]

cloudwolf · 发表于 22-11-2006 14:02:00|来自：

好，玉兰不错，哈哈

cloudwolf · 发表于 22-11-2006 14:21:00|来自：

玉兰，你写的不错。虽然我也是一个菜鸟，我也想给你一个意见，就是写英语的时候考虑完整的句子，知道句子的成分。我看你句子概念不强。都是一个一个逗号，看起来是多个句子。语法上来讲就不太正确了。 比如：We got this story at yesterday ,after school ,when I were in home ,I spend  four hours for reading it . 另外一句话说了太多意思，读起来不很顺畅。一句话表达的意思要简练，如果意思过多就用多个句子来表达。下面的例子，就把你的意思放3句话里面了，每句话都有一个简练的意思。学英语不是写长句子就一定好。原文： The story is not very long ,but it is so difficult to understand ,because most part of story describe the mental activity of dramatis personae who was a planter in <country-region wst="on"></country-region><place wst="on"></place>America<place></place><country-region></country-region> southern, it start from  he would be killed ,until he died ,,,我尝试改了下：  Although the story is not very long, it is very difficult to understand. Most part of the story describe the mental activity of dramatis personae who was a planter in <country-region wst="on"></country-region><place wst="on"></place>America<place></place><country-region></country-region> southern. It start from he would be killed ,until he died ,,, 瞎辧两句，我也是菜鸟，大家一起学习。

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