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发表于 27-7-2006 20:18:00|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p>&nbsp; 来新加坡有些日子了,在学校学英文时间也不短了,虽然平时也有写作的课,但是自己往往不是很用功,一方面是无法一直住在这里,因为中国还有一个家需要牵挂,另一方面是年纪大了,老师也不好意思追着我要家庭作业,,呵呵就这样蹉跎了,,,,</p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp; 近来有些郁闷,我想大家都知道为何,关于陪都---说到底没有继续讨论的意义,不需要再去表白,生活还在继续,还是找一点有意义的事情去做吧,</p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp; 前天儿子把我的陪都卡丢了,这两天忙着去补办,感触颇多,尝试用英文写日记,也算是我的家庭作业吧,</p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp; 我知道我的英文不怎样,希望大家不要笑话我,给一点鼓励吧,虽然年纪大,不过依然喜欢表扬,</p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp; 一个不再年轻的大妈,写的小学生水平的作文,还是比较困难的,不过我会坚持下去,希望大家可以分享我一天一天的进步带来的喜悦!!</p>
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发表于 27-7-2006 21:37:00|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 27-7-2006 20:18:00|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>HAVE<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>A<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>SENSE<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>OF<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>ACHIEVEMENT<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>TODAY<p></p></font></span></b></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>have<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>a<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>sense of<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>achievement<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>today,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>why?<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>Let<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>me<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>tell<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>you !The<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>thing<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>from three<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>days<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>ago……<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">Three<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>days<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>ago, my<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>landlord<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>phoned<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>me<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>that<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>she<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>would<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>collect<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>rent<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>and photocopy of<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>my<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>green card<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>at<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>evening. <p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">That<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>day<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>was<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>Tuesday. After<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>school<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>went<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>home at once. When I had<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>arrived home ,my son had<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>been at<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>home ,I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>decided that<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I went to parkway<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>parade to change<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>money<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>and<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>my<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>son went to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>photocopy<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>shop<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>where<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>he<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>will copy<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>my passport and green<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>card.<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.5;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">After half hour, I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>had been at home,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>but<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>my son<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>didn’t back, half hour passed<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>again,<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">My<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>son<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>backed ,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>he<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>was<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>looked<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>so<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>sad!<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>“what happen ?”I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>asked him,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>“I lost green<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>card!” my<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>son<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>answered.<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I was so angry! I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>shouted and asked to him ,”do<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>you<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>remember where you lost green card?”, my<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>son<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>said<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>“ I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>don’t know ,I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>just<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>took<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>passport at<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>my<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>hand<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>and<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>green card<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>was<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>put<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>in<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>passport, when<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>had<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>arrived<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>photocopy<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>shop,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>found<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>that green card<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>wasn’t<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>inside .so<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>looked<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>for<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>it<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>immediately<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>on<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>the<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>way<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>from<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>my<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>home<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>photocopy<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>shop<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>a<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>few<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>times<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>carefully, but<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>haven’t<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>found<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>it yet!”<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>was<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>afraid, so<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>at<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>moment<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>with<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>my<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>son<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>went<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>out<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>home<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>and<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>looked<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>for<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>green<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>card<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>on<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>the<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>way<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>together , I also<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>tried<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>asking<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>someone ,”dose<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>anyone<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>find<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>a<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>green<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>card<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>on<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>the<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>way ?” ,but<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>nobody<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>answered<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>me .<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">At<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>evening<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>my<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>landlord<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>came, I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>paid<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>money<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>for<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>rent<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>and<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>gave<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>my<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>passport<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>photocopy,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>and<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>said<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>“<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>sorry<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>, I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>couldn’t <span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span>give<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>you<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>my<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>green<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>card<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>photocopy<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>because<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>my<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>son<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>lost<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>my<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>card<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>today, I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>want<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to get<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>a<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>new<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>one soon, if<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I get<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>a<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>new<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>one ,I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>will<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>give<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>information<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to you !”<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">In<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>fact , I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>didn’t<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>know<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>, how<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>did<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>do ? what<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>could<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>do? Maybe<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>could<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>ask<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>help<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>immigration?<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">Yesterday, after<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>school ,about 1 o’clock<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>when<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>arrived<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>immigration<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>saw<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>that<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>so<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>many<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>people<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>were<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>waiting<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>at<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>serve<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>desk , I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>was<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>standing<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>there<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>too.<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">About<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>40<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>minutes<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>late<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>was<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>helped, the<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>official<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>asked<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>me “what<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>can<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>help<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>you ?”,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>told<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>him<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>about<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>that<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>lost<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>my<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>green<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>card ,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>and<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>wanted<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to get<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>a<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>new<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>card!<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>The<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>official<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>told<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>me<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>how<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>did<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>do , he<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>said “<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>first , you have<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>police<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>where<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>you<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>reported<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>about<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>your<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>trouble<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>policeman<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>, second<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>the<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>policeman<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>will<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>give<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>report<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>you , third<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>you<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>take<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>policeman’s<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>report<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>and<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>bake<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>here ,then<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>you<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>can<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>application<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>get<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>new<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>card”,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>“which<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>police<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>would<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>go ?”, I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>asked<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>official<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>again,” any<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>police<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>in<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>Singapore!” official<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>answer.<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">“is<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>there<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>any<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>police<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>near<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>here ?” I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>asked , “there<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>is<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>a police<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>behind<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>immigration building,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>you<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>can<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>walk<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>there<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>just<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>five<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>minutes!”, official<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>answer,<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">So, I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>left<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>immigration<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>and<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>looked<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>for<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>police<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>on<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>the<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>way, many<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>friendly<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>people<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>help<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>me , when<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>found<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>police ,I only spent 10 minutes!<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">The<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>policeman<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>is<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>very<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>young<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>and friendly, but<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>he<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>can’t<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>speak<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>Chinese ,I tried<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>speak<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>in<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>English<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>with<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>him, I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>told<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>him<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>about<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>that<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>lost green<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>card , the policeman<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>asked<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>me<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>about “what<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>things did you<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>lose,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>what time<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>did<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>you<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>lose<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>your<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>card, where<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>did<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>you<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>lose ,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>where<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>are<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>you from, how<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>old<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>are<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>you ??etc,,,,,,,,” I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>answered<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>the policeman’s question,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>just<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>waited<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>five<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>minutes , the policeman<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>had<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>finished<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>his<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>report. <p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">When<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>got<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>the<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>report<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>from<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>policeman , I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>was<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>so<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>happy! I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>took<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>it<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>and<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>backed<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>immigration<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>immediately!<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21.75pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman">There<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>were<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>so<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>many<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>people<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>waiting<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>at<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>immigration<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>still. About<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>after<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>40<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>minutes <span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>got<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>serve<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>number, then<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>waiting<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>about<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>one<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>hour<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>for<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>official, I sent<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>my<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>passport<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>and<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>policeman’s<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>report<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>official , official<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>told<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>me “tomorrow<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>you<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>have<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>change<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>your<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>number<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>new<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>one ,you<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>would<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>get<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>your<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>new<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>card”<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>Today<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>,after<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>school , I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>went<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to immigration<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>and<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>changed<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>my<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>serve<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>number,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>waiting<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>about<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>40<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>minutes ,,,,,,,,haha ,,,,,,,,finally ,,,,,,,,,,,,I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>had<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>got<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>a<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>new<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>green<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>card,<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;"><font face="Times New Roman"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>have<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>a<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>sense<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>of<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>achievement ,because<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>during<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span>got<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>new<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>card ,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>asked<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>help<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>many<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>people ,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>official<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>,policeman<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>, gentleman, lady,,,,,,,,,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>nobody<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>can<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>speak<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>Chinese ,so<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>if<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>want<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>communicate<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>with<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>someone<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>have<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>to<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>speak<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>in<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>English,<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>fortunate<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>I<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>was<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span>successful!<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></font><p></p></span></p><p></p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 27&nbsp; july&nbsp; 2006</p>
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发表于 27-7-2006 20:21:00|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 27-7-2006 20:27:00|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
<p>谢谢你对流水帐的夸奖!!</p>
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发表于 27-7-2006 21:09:00|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
支持! 不断的学习并且运用是我们学习的动力.并且每一个进步都组成生活中的快乐!
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发表于 27-7-2006 22:22:00|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
<p>呵呵, 搞不好我是第一个读完全文的人. 首先对楼主的精神表示支持哈, 其次, 觉得有些地方可能还是需要改进(俺不是语言专家, 只是根据自己的理解来说一说, 欢迎高手指正):</p><p>1. 尽量不要直译汉语, 就是说不要一个字一个字的把一个句子或者一个词翻译成英语, 比如上面的serve desk....楼主是想表达服务台的意思么? 你可以用service counter, help desk, reception等等;</p><p>2. 过去式的用法, 文中出现了很多had been, so call 过去完成时, 其实我觉得没有必要, 大部分都可以用过去式代替;</p><p>3. 移民局最好用ICA, 警察局应该是police station吧?</p><p>4. 还有一些语法错误, 但是不妨碍交流, 不过听起来.....[em04][em04]</p><p>嘿嘿, 抛砖引玉哈~~~</p>
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发表于 27-7-2006 22:26:00|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
<p>谢谢楼上指教!</p><p>thanks&nbsp; for&nbsp; your teaching!</p>
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发表于 27-7-2006 22:47:00|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
Nothing but perseverance can lead a man to the way of success.If you make up your mind to do it, You will certainly accomplish your end.
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发表于 27-7-2006 23:21:00|来自:新加坡 | 显示全部楼层
看完了,加油。
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