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玉兰 · 发表于 24-12-2006 19:57:00|来自：新加坡

24 Dec 2006    Yesterday there was a party in my house, about 25-28(in fact, I hadn’t count it) people sit it on the party , my house is small and simple ,there are not many tables and enough chairs for guests ,so ,we moved TV and some furniture out off  living room ,then we set up two coffee tables on living room center , 旧的东西brought so many cushions , we set up those cushions around living room ,I am really grateful for 旧的东西's helping    旧的东西 is a nice guy who is also a administrators in the website which is the TEA- SHOP of sgchinese ,I have known that he is my neighbor ,his house just is far from mine <chmetcnv tcsc="0" numbertype="1" negative="False" hasspace="False" sourcevalue="100" unitname="m" wst="on"></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv>100m<chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv>,he is a passionate person and bear oneself is decent. I am also grateful for  yelunp,yb1963,天使，过来人在此，琳琳 helping, they arrived the party early and helped me to do many housework! If I haven’t got helping from them , I  wouldn’t make enough food for the party. 过来人在此brought a bottle of alcohol—五粮液！w-a-a-a,,,, we can drink 五粮液 in Singapore that is so lucky things !琳琳brought a bottle of wine ,a sister brought a boiler 西米露 ,I thought this sister took the boiler so hard , because she took it to my house  by MRT and bus ! a brother brought a chocolate cake！also 旧的东西and his brothers brought so many food to my house , some alcohol/ drink/ fruit/dumpling /and many dishware (only one time using),,,The ambience of the party was exciting ,we were all sit at cushions, drank alcohol/ ate meat ; dumpling ;baozi , I am lucky, I knew many people in the party ,I want to be friend with them![em22][em23][em22][em23][em22][em23][em22][em23][em22][em23]

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咖啡油条 · 发表于 25-12-2006 11:03:00|来自：新加坡

[em04][em04][em04]大姐把小妹夸得脸直红。。。。。。。只要我能发现的，就会告诉ＪＪ喔！！彼此学习．．．彼此学习！！！

玉兰 · 发表于 25-12-2006 10:44:00|来自：新加坡

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder">----玉兰姐姐，小妹觉得这样写better:   a) I am really grateful for 旧的东西 's helping;b) His house is just 100m far away from mine;c) I want to make friends with them;d) 旧的东西 is a nice guy who is also a administrators in the TEA- SHOP of sgchinese website.( much easier,right?)e)Yesterday there was a party in my house, about 25-28 people attended the party. there are not many tables and enough chairs for guests. （桌子和椅子是可数名词）<chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv>[em04]</div>[em17][em17][em17] it is much better than mine,,,, i am really grateful your helping!i hope , you might red-pencil my diary every day and  help me to improve my English!Yulan make a bow to you !![em20][em20][em20][em20][em20][em20][em20]

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咖啡油条 · 发表于 25-12-2006 10:24:00|来自：新加坡

I am really grateful for 旧的东西 helping  his house just is far from mine <chmetcnv tcsc="0" numbertype="1" negative="False" hasspace="False" sourcevalue="100" unitname="m" wst="on"></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv>100mI want to be friend with them!旧的东西 is a nice guy who is also a administrators in the website which is the TEA- SHOP of sgchinese
 Yesterday there was a party in my house, about 25-28(in fact, I hadn’t count it) people sit it on the party , my house is small and simple ,there are not many table and enough chair for guests ,so ,we moved TV and some furniture out off  living room ,then we set up two coffee table on living room center ----玉兰姐姐，小妹觉得这样写better:a) I am really grateful for 旧的东西 's helping;b) His house is just 100m far away from mine;c) I want to make friends with them;d) 旧的东西 is a nice guy who is also a administrators in the TEA- SHOP of sgchinese website.( much easier,right?)e)Yesterday there was a party in my house, about 25-28 people attended the party. there are not many tables and enough chairs for guests. （桌子和椅子是可数名词）<chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv><chmetcnv></chmetcnv>[em04]

yelunp · 发表于 26-12-2006 00:11:00|来自：新加坡

君子吃cake，十年不晚！

旧的东西 · 发表于 26-12-2006 00:20:00|来自：新加坡

多谢夸奖！！！

玉兰 · 发表于 26-12-2006 00:02:00|来自：新加坡

but we had eaten many different cakes,,,,[em02][em02][em02][em02]

yelunp · 发表于 25-12-2006 23:59:00|来自：新加坡

幸亏我没去，连baizi 也吃不上！

玉兰 · 发表于 25-12-2006 23:49:00|来自：新加坡

25 Dec 2006  Today is Christmas day .I just stay home for relax in the morning! afternoon I invited some friends to come my home,I treat them for supper with some simple food ,I make some sticky rice cake /shallot -cake /dumpling,,, Befer, I want to treat tham some baozi ,but when I finished making it ,I found that the  meat aren't fresh in the baozi ,the baozi can't be eaten,so sad ! So , I decided to make some cake for supper,I went to supermarket to buy some flour immediately ,then cooked different cake at home,  Surper was really simple ,but we were all happly ,a few friend met together just for tolking ,eating simple food and drinking soft belly-wash / sweet soup,so nice,,,[em27][em27][em27][em27][em27]

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yelunp · 发表于 25-12-2006 23:44:00|来自：新加坡

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder">以下是引用玉兰在2006-12-24 19:57:00的发言： 24 Dec 2006   I am also grateful for  yelunp,yb1963,天使，过来人在此，琳琳 helping, they arrived the party early and helped me to do many housework! If I haven’t got helping from them , I  wouldn’t make enough food for the party.[em22][em23][em22][em23][em22][em23][em22][em23][em22][em23] </div>总算有人夸奖我了，呵，包baozi的时候，差一点被陷害呢。幸亏那包子个个争气。

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