my homework

玉兰 · 发表于 30-7-2006 20:18:00|来自：新加坡

30  July  2006    I  am  so tired,because  I  played  badminton  for  3 hours  at  afternoon  today,I want  to go to bed early![em04][em04][em04][em04][em04]

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玉兰 · 发表于 31-7-2006 18:56:00|来自：新加坡

呵呵,  sorry!!!

tianwait · 发表于 31-7-2006 18:50:00|来自：新加坡

太“口语化”了点。呵呵。有些东西重复了多次。比如：“today” ,还有上一篇的，“three days ago" 也“唠叨” 了2遍

玉兰 · 发表于 31-7-2006 17:14:00|来自：新加坡

31 July  2006 31 July  2006 31 July  2006Today   Vivian  didn’t  come  to  school , we  talked  about her, teacher  said  maybe   she  had  homesick!Vivian  comes from Taiwan , She came to  Singapore  six months ago, before she worked in advertisement company  in Taiwan , when  she got married she left  her family and came to Singapore ,because  her husband  is a Singaporean !  Vivian is a sensitive girl .I remember last week we talked about family together, when she talked her father \mother and brother she looked so sad! Her eyes were full teared!  When  I  talk  my family ,I  said “anyone is more happy than me in classroom ,because you have mother and father ,but I haven’t, they died from ten years  ago! I very miss them but I can’t   see them again for ever!”, Vivian ran out of classroom because she  had  sounded  crying!  This  week , our class other a  boy , who also come  from Taiwan he  has  retuned  Taiwan , Vivian feel sad so she couldn’t come to school ,oh poor  girl ! Today  ,we also talk about  陪读妈妈 in Singapore , Peter also know about 中国陪读妈妈, why do we talk this topic? because I said ,I am a mother and look after my children in <country-region wst="on"></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><place wst="on"></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place>Singapore<place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region> only ,but I am a good mother ! Today  ,we also talk about  陪读妈妈 in Singapore , Peter also know about 中国陪读妈妈, why do we talk this topic? because I said ,I am a mother and look after my children in <country-region wst="on"></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><place wst="on"></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place>Singapore<place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><place></place><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region> only ,but I am a good mother !Than  Peter  said, some news  show  that 中国陪读妈妈 are  to do the oldest profession----prostitution, but he didn’t think so, news  just news!He also said, if someone bother you ,you can say this :     Mind your own business!     Keep you nose out of  my business!Hehe ,,,,,,,,,, ,these  are  good  sentence ,I try to remember  them !老师批改我的作业,现订正如下. Today   Vivian  didn’t  come  to  school , we  talked  about her, the teacher  said  maybe   she  was  homesick!Vivian  comes from <country-region wst="on">Taiwan</country-region> , She came to  <country-region wst="on">Singapore</country-region>  six months ago, before she worked in advertisement company  in <country-region wst="on"><place wst="on">Taiwan</place></country-region> . When  she got married, she left  her family and came to <country-region wst="on"><place wst="on">Singapore</place></country-region> ,because  her husband  is a Singaporean !  Vivian is a sensitive girl .I remember last week we talked about family together. When she talked her parents and brother she looked so sad! Her eyes were full  of tears!  When  I  talked  my family ,I  said “anyone is more happy than me our  classroom ,because you have a  mother and  a father ,but I haven’t, they died  ten years  ago! I miss them very much but I can’t   see them again for any more!”, Vivian ran out of  the classroom because she  had  started crying!  This  week , our class has an  other boy , who also comes  from Taiwan ,he  has  returned  to Taiwan , Vivian felt sad , so she couldn’t come to school ,oh poor  girl ! Today  ,we also talked about study mother  in <country-region wst="on"><place wst="on">Singapore</place></country-region> , Peter also know about  some study mother  who from china , why did we talk  about this topic? Because I said , I am a  study  mother  who  just  look after  my  children  in Singapore ,but I am a good mother !Than  Peter  said, some news  show  that study mother who from china  do  that prostitution  which  are  the oldest profession, but he didn’t think so, news  just  news!He also said, if someone bothers  you ,you can say this :     Mind your own business!     Keep your nose out of  my business!Hehe ,,,,,,,,,, ,these  are  good  sentence ,I will try to remember  them !

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蓝山清风 · 发表于 31-7-2006 17:36:00|来自：新加坡

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder">Well done! </div>when she talked (about) her (parents) and brother, she looked so sad! Her eyes were full (of) tears! When I
talk(ed) (about) mine, I said “anyone (here) is happ(ier) than me, because you have mother and father ,but I haven’t, they passed away ten years  ago! I miss them (very much) but I can’t see them any more!” Today, we also talked about  陪读妈妈 (study mamas) in Singapore, Peter also knows about 中国陪读妈妈, why did we talk about this topic? because I said, I am a mother and only look after my child in <country-region wst="on"></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><country-region></country-region><place wst="on"></place><place></place><place></place><place></place>Singapore, but I am a good mother !Then Peter said, some news saying(ing) that 中国陪读妈妈 are  to do the oldest profession----prostitution, but he didn’t think so, news were  just news!He also said, if anyone bothers you ,you can say this :     Mind your own business!     Keep your nose out of  my business!Hehe ,,,,,,,,,, ,these are
good sentences, I try to remember them !<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"> </div>Shall I mind my own business? haha

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玉兰 · 发表于 31-7-2006 15:07:00|来自：新加坡

thank  you ! tianwait !  蓝山清风!  haha ..............

蓝山清风 · 发表于 31-7-2006 14:35:00|来自：新加坡

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder">以下是引用玉兰在2006-7-31 13:53:00的发言： 31 July  2006  Today  my  teacher,Peter an American  guy  returned  my  homework to  me!hehe,,,,,,,,There  are  so many  mistake  in  my  writing,,,,,,so  I  correct  it  here!</div>Poor Peter!! He must have a big headache, ha haPeter an American  guy - Peter, that American guy -- Since you mentioned Peter before, you can use that.mistakes -- so many mistakes correct  it  -- corret them (because not one mistake)

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tianwait · 发表于 31-7-2006 14:36:00|来自：新加坡

"I  have  a  sense of  achievement  today,  why?  Let  me  tell  you !The  thing  from three  days  ago……"change to :"I  have  a  sense of  achievement  today,  
Let  me  tell  you why? "

玉兰 · 发表于 31-7-2006 13:53:00|来自：新加坡

31 July  2006  Today  my  teacher,Peter an American  guy  returned  my  homework to  me!hehe,,,,,,,,There  are  so many  mistake  in  my  writing,,,,,,so  I  correct  it  here!I  HAVE  A  SENSE  OF  ACHIEVEMENT  TODAYI  have  a  sense of  achievement  today,  why?  Let  me  tell  you !The  thing  from three  days  ago……Three  days  ago, my  landlord  phoned  me  that  she  would  collect  rent  and photocopy of  my  green card  in  the  evening. That  day  was  Tuesday. After  school  I  went  home at once. When I had  arrived home ,my son had  been at  home ,I  decided that  I would go to  parkway  parade to change  money  and  my  son went to a  photocopy  shop  where  he  would  copy  my passport and green  card.After a  half hour, I   had been at home,  but  my son  didn’t come back, another  half  hour passed  again,My  son  returned , he  looked  so  sad!  “what happened ?”I  asked him,  “I lost the  green  card!” my  son  answered.  I was so angry! I  shouted and asked  him ,”do  you  remember where you lost green card?”, my  son  said  “ I  don’t know ,I  just  took the  passport in  my  hand  and  green card  was  put  in the passport, when  I  had  arrived  at  the  photocopy   shop,  I  found  that the green card  wasn’t  inside .so  I  looked  for  it  immediately  on  the  way  from  my  home  to the  photocopy  shop  a  few  times  carefully, but  I  haven’t  found  it yet!”   I  was  afraid, so  at that  moment,  I  went with  my  son and  looked  for  the green  card together , I also  tried  asking  someone ,”has  anyone  found  a  green   card  on  the  way ?” ,but  nobody  answered  me .In the  evening  my  landlord  came, I  paid  money  for  rent  and  gave  my  passport   photocopy,  and  said  “  sorry  , I   couldn’t  give  you  my  green   card  photocopy  because  my  son  lost  my  card   today, I   want  to get  a  new  one soon, if  I get  a  new  one ,I  will  give  the  information  to you !”In  fact , I  didn’t   know  ,what  could  I  do ? Maybe  I  could ask for  help  from  immigration?Yesterday, after  school ,about 1 o’clock , when  I  arrived  at immigration  I  saw  that   so  many  people  were  waiting  at  the  service   desk , I  was  standing  there  too.About  40  minutes  later  I  was  helped, the  official   asked  me “how  can  I  help  you ?”,  I  told  him  that  I  lost  my  green   card ,  and  I  wanted  to get  a  new  card!  The   official  told  me  what  to   do , he  said “  first , you have  to  go to  police  where  you  should report  about  your  trouble  to  a  policeman  , second  the  policeman  will  give a report  to  you , third  you  take  the policeman’s  report  and  come bake  here ,then   you  can  application  to  get a  new  card”,  “to which  police  should  I  go ?”, I  asked  the official  again,” any  police  in  Singapore!” the  official  answer.“is  there  any  police  near  here ?” I  asked , “there  is  a police  station behind  the  immigration building,  you  can  walk   to  there in just   five  minutes!”, the official  answered.So, I  left  immigration  and  looked  for the  police  on  the  way, many  friendly  people  helped  me , when  I  found  the   police ,I only spent 10 minutes!The  policeman  was very   young  and friendly, but  he  can’t  speak   Chinese ,I tried  to  speak  in   English  with  him, I  told  him  that  I  lost my green  card , the policeman  asked  me  about “what  things did you  lose,  what time  did  you   lose  your  card, where  did  you  lose it,  where  are  you from, how  old  are  you ??etc,,,,,,,,” I  answered  the policeman’s question, and just  waited  five  minutes , the policeman  had  finished  his  report. When  I  got  the  report  from the  policeman , I  was  so  happy! I  took  it  and  went  back  to  immigration  immediately!There  were  so  many  people  waiting  at  immigration  still.  After about  40  minutes  I  got  a service  number, then  waited about  one  hour  for  an official, I sent  my  passport  and  policeman’s   report  to the  official , the official  told  me “tomorrow  you   have  to  change  your  number  to a new  one , and you  will  get  your  new  card”    Today  ,after  school , I  went  to immigration  and   changed  my  service number, waiting  about   40  minutes ,,,,,,,,haha ,,,,,,,,finally ,,,,,,,,,,,,I  had  got  a  new   green  card,     I   have  a  sense  of  achievement ,because  while  getting a new   card ,  I  asked  help  from many  people : an  official, a  policeman,  a gentleman, a lady,,,,,,,,,  nobody  could  speak  Chinese ,so  if  I  want  to  communicate  with  someone  I  have  to  speak  in  English,  fortunately  I  was  successful!

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