my homework

蓝山清风 · 发表于 2-8-2006 23:36:00|来自：新加坡

我刚刚也写了我的日记.回忆了一个同学写诗的情景.呵呵.不是在暗示你哦,

玉兰 · 发表于 3-8-2006 16:42:00|来自：新加坡

3  Aug  2006 Yesterday  night , I  had  read 蓝山清风diary and  minded  long  time  at  xiao yong ,so today , I  just  write about  my  thinking here !Oh, How  poor  boy  must  be! If  xiao yong  wasn’t  a  Chinese  boy ;If  his mother  language  wasn’t  Chinese ;If  he was  an American  boy ………………..I  think  that  result   would  be  different at all , nobody   laughed  at  his  “poem”, maybe the  teacher   was  surprised  and  was  cried  up  about  it! maybe  the  teacher  would  say “ how  clever   boy ! your  poem  is good! It  is  so correctly  that  described  about  our school’s eatery , also  sentences  are  flowing and  rhymed!”If  my  English  degree  is  same  xiao yong’s  “poem” in Chinese ,,,,,,I  would  be happy  for  my  English !I have to study hard unremittingly! My English degree will be same xiaoyong’s Chinese soon!  I hope and  wait  it. 昨天夜里看了蓝山清风妹妹的日记，关于肖勇我感触颇多，，，，，夜不能寐，今天写一点自己的感受，，， 可怜的肖勇啊！ 如果你不是一个中国人，如果你的母语不是中文，如果你是一个美国人，，我想其结果是完全不同的，没有人会笑话你的诗，你的老师会非常惊讶的表扬你，“多么聪明的孩子！你的诗非常之好！非常恰当地描述了我们学校的食堂，而且语句通顺压韵！” 我还想，如果我的英文水平能够达到肖勇“诗”的中文水平，，，我一定为自己的英文水平而感到高兴。 我只有坚持，努力，也许我的英文水平可以很快达到那个程度！ 我期盼着，我等待着，，，，，，，，，，，，

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蓝山清风 · 发表于 3-8-2006 17:51:00|来自：新加坡

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder">以下是引用玉兰在2006-8-3 17:46:00的发言： hehe,,,,,,,,,,,  when i have a lot on my mind,i will  get insomnia! sometime i was homesick or mind my job! sometime i didn't mind anyting but i can't aspleep,i have to depend on  medician,,,,,,,,  this is my trouble![em04][em04][em04][em04][em03][em03][em03][em03]</div>Oh, I thought I made you sleepless, otherwise, I will feel guilty.Last night, after a not bad meal and a walking beside the sea, I felt much better.And obviously studying and making improvement will help you to cheer up or have a sound sleep.That's why I keep studying as well. hehe.--- when you are awake / sleepless, we say, can't fall in sleep.---

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玉兰 · 发表于 3-8-2006 17:46:00|来自：新加坡

hehe,,,,,,,,,,,  when i have a lot on my mind,i will  get insomnia! sometime i was homesick or minded my job! sometime i didn't mind anyting but i couldn't aspleep,i had  to depend on  medician,,,,,,,,  this is my trouble![em04][em04][em04][em04][em03][em03][em03][em03]

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蓝山清风 · 发表于 3-8-2006 17:31:00|来自：新加坡

Why sleepless? I said 不是在暗示你哦. I didn't finish my dairy untill almost midnight, you were too late to go to bed.I seemed to work without too much mood this week, so I recalled some school days.Actually Xiao was not poor, I just thought of him and his intetresting poem by chance. I think I am so lucky to have those classmates with different talents.And I also agree we should not laugh at the other's language but should encourage the others.---------------Last night , I (no need had)
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tianwait · 发表于 4-8-2006 00:44:00|来自：新加坡

楼上的E文真的不错。

蓝山清风 · 发表于 4-8-2006 13:50:00|来自：新加坡

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder">以下是引用tianwait在2006-8-4 0:44:00的发言： 楼上的E文真的不错。</div>Thanks. 我有一定的基础, 但是就是上不去[em19]

玉兰 · 发表于 4-8-2006 16:41:00|来自：新加坡

4 Aug  2006      Before ,I had written about  Lami ,today I would write about Lisa.       Lisa is a lady ,who  is a chinese. one year  ago ,she came to Singapore  with her family. her  husband  owned  an architectural  company in Singapore ,so  her  family  immigrated  here.     Lisa has two sons, the older one is studying in secondary  school, the young one  is  studying  in primary school. her family members  are very  close.     Lisa is about 40 years  old,she is feminime , and  always  kind to everyone.also  she  is a good  student and stydies  hard!     Lisa's home town  is  in the  contryside  of  Fujian  China.She graduated  from  secondary  school, but didn't  go  to uniwersity. When  she got married , she  was  in  the contryside  and  did  farm work.    her  husband  is a clever  and hardworking  man, he was a  worker many  years ago, but now ,he is a boss and owns  the  company  in Singapore,he also didn't go to high shool or any university .Lisa  and  her husband both  could't speak  English brfore, but ,they wanted to learn  English, they  thought  that it's  useful   for  their  business.  Lisa's  husband is very busy  ,so he  can't go  to shool regularly ,so Lisa  decided to  learn English  starting  from  the  beginning! She studies  very  hard  and difficult ,becouse her base is so  bad!  frist time ,I  saw  Lisa  about one year ago ,while I sent my son to go to the language  school ,she was  shtdying in beginning  class with  many  children ,we talked use in  chinese ,she told  me that she was afraid  that  she couldn't  sthdy  well.But ,she perseveres  in  studying  English,beginning ,elementary ,pre-intermediate ,now we are all  studying  at the intermeidiate  level.  In fact, almost  level ,Lisa  had to study  twice!now she can speak in English  and  not bad  either!  Lisa is  a  good student.her doing  prove-better late than  never!

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玉兰 · 发表于 4-8-2006 19:02:00|来自：新加坡

Thank  you  for  your  suggestion!      It's  better  than  before!     [em17][em17][em17][em20][em20][em20]     [em27][em27][em27][em44][em44][em44]

蓝山清风 · 发表于 4-8-2006 18:02:00|来自：新加坡

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder">   Once, I wrote about  Lami, today I would like to write about Lisa.       Lisa is a chinese lady. one year ago ,she came to Singapore  with her family. her  husband  owned  an architectural  company in Singapore ,so  her  family  immigrated  here.     Lisa has two sons, the older one is studying in secondary  school, the younger one  is  studying  in primary school. her family members  are very  close.     Lisa is about 40 years  old,she is feminime , and  always  kind to everyone.also  she  is a good  student and stydies  hard!  now we are both  studying  at the intermeidiate  level.  In fact, almost every  level ,Lisa  had to study  twice!now she can speak in English  and  not bad  either!  Lisa is  a  good student. she proves-better late than  never!   Agree!
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